Score: 6

"Not bad..."

submission: How Its Done (Skrewed)

date: November 8, 2009

To be honest, when you said chopped n' skrewed, 1. T-Pain came in my head and 2. I expected a remidial instrumental. I was definitely wrong. You do know what you're doing, just a few things. I really like your main line and I think you should have built off of the line itself (eg. countermelodies), using it as more of a guideline for the direction of the song. The brass would have worked better in a song with a faster tempo; to be honest, I didn't like it that much, but that's just a matter of opinion. One last thing, to really contribute to the atmosphere, I would have dropped the snare and left just the clap.

Score: 8

"Very good percussion..."

submission: [ f ] Friends

date: November 8, 2009

You have some very sick percussion on this one Flash. You really rocked the sample on this one. One thing is just that your percussion either needs to be a bit quieter or your sample needs to be coming up because it's being overpowered. I also like the way you reintroduced the intro's hook with the percussion. Another good one, Flash!!!

Score: 7

"Very hard atmosphere..."

submission: KC_Picture Me Rollin

date: November 8, 2009

A minor was a very good choice for this instrumental. You presented a really raw subject with the strings and the percussion complimented them. Your synth in the chorus was slightly loud, so turn that down a bit. I'd have liked to hear more intricacy in your keys. Using staccato in the keys' bass notes would be a wise choice in amping up a vibe. As a general rule, so the song doesn't drag I would have liked to hear a faster tempo. But all in all the beat has great potential!!! Good work.

Score: 10

"Very clever."

submission: [ f ] The Giant

date: February 25, 2009

You definitely made the right choices in using the sample you had. Though you didn't add anything of melodic value (which was a smart choice) your percussion allowed a hard flow within the music. Not much more I can say to improve it. Well done.

Score: 8

"Nice vibe."

submission: Elevator Musick

date: February 21, 2009

It didn't bring what the title promised but I still like what it brought. Elevator Music would be slower and more relaxed. However, the drums rode the rhodes just fine. The pauses were very tasteful. It just gets slightly repetitive. Try some more versatlity in your chords and a slight melody over the chords. Also, lower the volume of the open and closed hi-hats as they stand out slightly. I like where it's going though. Nice work.

Score: 8

"Very Nice"

submission: [tf] Rising Tensions

date: January 22, 2009

I really like the synth work you did on this piece. The lead is very catchy. This song definitely has a lot of potential. I would love to add some keys over it and upload if you give the okay.

Anyway, the percussion is very catchy and your sense of panning is very controlled along with your equalizing. I would definitely love to work with you.

Score: 9

"A bit flawed, but works..."

submission: Drums of Fate

date: January 20, 2009

I think without the harp, the song would be much better off. Your strings and synths don't follow the harp and it hurts the song. It's amazing but removing the harp would add much more depths to your driving strings.

Score: 10

"This is really catchy!"

submission: Tomorrow's A New Day

date: December 15, 2008

It's slightly repetitive, but it's alright. It's pretty good restricted to the packs of FL. You should look into getting more packs to enhance the song, I could do it for you (I really want to remaster it); but only if you let me. The piano line could also be switched up a bit to create variety. Other than that, this song's amazing!

Great job!

Score: 10

"The Atmosphere...Wow..."

submission: [ f ] Heating Up

date: December 13, 2008

The ambience you present in each of your songs is angelic. You represented C-minor in a way that I never could have imagined. Your synth work really had an effect on me. You also included one of my favourite chords - the dominant minor 7th - of all time so you get auto-10 (not that you wouldn't have gotten one beforehand).

Score: 9

"Your Sample Work Was Great Here"

submission: [ f ] Rage

date: December 13, 2008

At first I wasn't sure if I was going to like the song but it built up pretty well. I still think there could be more 'umph' in the kick to compliment your chords and synth work. Overall, the song is pretty nice. Good work.